Looks decent. I think I'll give it a shot.
That was actually better than I expected. Quite an improvement you've done with animation. You have raised my expectations. :)
Writing: Flat and uninteresting
You've obviously put a lot of effort into this, but what Kirbother's TOME has taught me is that effort alone does not make something worth watching. You have the ability to do a better story than just catching a Pikachu and roasting it on a fire. Kudos on the Flapjack reference, but that was the only good joke in the entire video.
Well, you know what they say, ogres are like onions.
They make you cry.
Photoshop makes you cry too...
Kudos on the animation, and the art style made it more adorable than it already is.
It's 2014. We're waiting. ;)
I can say in full honesty that you are the strangest girl I've ever seen on the Internet.
Which is the reason why this video is so new and innovative. I hardly see videos with this level of crudeness, and the art style is very unique. Not my cup of tea when it comes to the theme, but dammit, this video's pretty neat, and I'm looking forward to the full movie.
This certainly made my day.
haha he never died after all lol
That was disgusting, tasteless, and immature.
And I f*cking loved it.
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