TheMAM's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Knock Knock]

I don't get the parallel of these characters with the characters from the movie, except the voice of Stewie which was pretty spot on, and the animation, although did serve it's purpose, did seem pretty stiff and somewhat lazy, like how there are 0-1 inbetween frames and just a jump-body-cut transition, which makes it seem too quick and dodgy.
Regardless, pretty good for an exercise, and the lip syncing was alright. Keep improving.

JewelzMiles responds:

Thanks dude, yea for sure ill keep working at it!

[Robot Boy Show - 1-15-16]

Wow, if this got Daily First, then the daily awards have lost all their legitimacy to me.
Regardless, badly animated, but gave me a giggle.

robot-jones responds:

giggle my miggle

[Cell Dance]

As an educational video, it wasn't that informative. Simply listing the different parts of cells and their processes without explaining them leads to general confusion.
As for the animation, abusing shape tweening makes the animation look like one from the early 2000s. The backgrounds and slides weren't put together well, as white on the boarders and some slides being smaller than others is a bit of an eyesore.
As for the subject, Newgrounds isn't really the place for this kind of stuff. If you want to post something educational or experimental, it should be something innovative and creative like "Scale of the Universe" or in a lighter case "Doodle God".
With a little more practice in Flash and its fundamentals, you'll get the hang of structuring your videos more properly. As of now, this is amateur video structure, and I hope to see you improve in the future.

KA-KeitorinArtist responds:

This was for my anatomy class, and we were going over the cell structure. Not a bad animation that was created in less than a week, aye? :D

The details of the project weren't supposed to be at all informative to the audience. It was supposed to be a way to get the students to crack open the textbook and remember something from biology. Which for me was almost nothing. o3o woops.

Ah, yup, tweening, my favorite past time from 2005. That's roughly when I was taught animation. Particularly Flash. I don't use it in today's work, but given the dead line- I had to make something to get a grade.

The boarder issue is mostly due to my goof when creating the initial animation. I started making it in, I think, Html 5 canvas. Then realized why I was so lost. Moved to creating it in Action Script 3.0, where I was originally taught flash, and then ran into the issue that I didn't know any of the new coding for flash. Haha, good times for short deadlines.

Overall, I got a 95 on it, and that is satisfactory for me :D
I don't know if I'll post future animations, partly due to all previous attempts at flash going ignored and getting pulled down by newgrounds, This was posted here for class because I learned that my teacher's computer couldn't play it.

And even then it still technically didn't play and I had to quick upload it to deviantart. :P

Overall, if I post anything in the future- Random remixed music that I made wouldn't be used, and Tweening would be abandoned once again.

Thank-you for the structured critique though!

[Window Fish]

Animation was a bit stiff, but I get the time constraints.
Also, please remember to credit the music next time.

megadrivesonic responds:

Oh sorry I forgot to had those in, music was added post animation like the sound effects since adding them in flash gives you know control of the volume.

[Starbomb: I Choose You to Die!!! Fanimated]

Adorable animation, and nice choice of song from Starbomb. The effort you put really shows here, this turned out great.

Art5yman responds:

thank you!

[TMNT - It's just a mask!]

Did... did you trace Paul Ter Voorde's version?

Dude. You're better than this.

just2pale responds:

I obviously used his as reference since I give credit to him at the end.

[Shrek Teaches Photoshop]

Well, you know what they say, ogres are like onions.
They make you cry.

Also, lol.

Gerkinman responds:

Photoshop makes you cry too...

[Art of The Mattress]

Kudos on the animation, and the art style made it more adorable than it already is.

Intrapulation responds:

Much obliged.

[James and the Chief 2]

It's 2014. We're waiting. ;)

LazyMuffin responds:

SHIT

[Buncha Guys - EP1 (Pilot)]

I must say, with cleaner line art, this is close to TV material. :)
Nice pilot, man. Looking forward to more.

WeirdoGoon responds:

Thanks so much! I'm finalizing the script and concept art for the 2nd one now; Thanks for watching!